As we write the most important thing is going to be at the top of the pyramid.
The least important is going to be at the top of the pyramid.
The Lede is going to attempt to answer the questions- Who, what, when, where, why and how.
First paragraph is the Lede, second is the Nut graph, third is always going to be a direct quote, fourth is a factual statement. Next is a direct quote, after that it will always be statement, quote, statement, quote.
Who-
Roger Clementine (13)
John Jacob Jingleheimer-Smith (91)
Melba Smith (67)
What-
A car accident occurred
Where-
The intersection at First street and Slaughter Lane
When-
Tuesday afternoon at 4:45
How-
A car was driving in the wrong lane and hit another car head on
Why-
An under age driver was going 60 miles per hour on the wrong side of the road
Lede-
On Tuesday around 4:45 p.m. 13 year old Roger Clementine was driving a car in the wrong lane and crashed head on into 91 year old John Jacob Jingleheimer-Smith, and his 67 year old wife Melba on
the intersection at First street and Slaughter Lane.
Nut graf-
Clementine was taken to the Hospital for cuts to his face but was released that evening , and the elderly couple was also rushed to the EMS. Mr. Smith had a very serious concussion and is still very injured as of right now, Mrs. Smith suffered a nose bleed but was also released later that evening.
Quote-
"When I went out for a walk this afternoon I expected to see things, but never this." eye witness Kimberly Krane said.
Factual Statement -
Clemintine was cited by Police officers three times for under aged driving, driving in the wrong lane, and speeding.
Quote-
"That kid is a great example of what the country is teaching our future, nothing but bad stuff." driver of the Yugo John Jacob Jingleheimer-Smith said.
Factual-
All three people were from Austin, and were driving to enjoy the nice, sunny weather.
Quote-
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